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Fri, Mar. 21st, 2008, 02:40 pm
schizophrenic0:

Hey, hey, hey! I've got a new one here:

Title:Skittery and da goil
Suethor:Kutestar94

Name:Lily
Oh, What Gorgeous Hair!:N/A
Eyes Like...: N/A
Sue-type: Angsty Rich Girl
I Didn't Know He Had a Sister/Cousin!: Well, one of the them has a rich twin brother
She's From Where?: A rich family
Whose Girlfriend is She, Anyway?: Skittery's, or so I assume from the title
Rating: I'd say maybe two. There are very few grammatical/spelling errors and the use of the accent seems to stop with the title.
Notes: Lily is rich (and makes slingshots?). Her parents want to marry her off to a rich man. She doesn't want this. AngstAngstAngst etc.
Excerpt(s):

"Benjamin answered first, " I have one other brother but we don't talk about him." I cautiously tried to get him to answer my question," Why not?" I batted me eyes innocently. He leaned in and whispered quickly," He was and is my twin. He left to join the "newsies" and my parents disowned him."

Yes, because obviously living on the streets and starving is totally better than having money. If I were a rich kid in the 19th century I'd be all about starvation and stuff.

Best Line: "She clapped her hands in delight and left the room before I had a chance to tell her there was no way in hell I was marrying my father, even if he wasn't my REAL father."

Sorry, that jsut made me giggle.

Tue, Jun. 3rd, 2008 12:25 pm (UTC)
apathy4_10: Who's your daddy? You are!

Hehe. Never really heard of a story where the Mary Sue wanted to marry a sibling. Shame. Then they could keep the Mary Sue alleles within the family. v.v