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Sun, Oct. 9th, 2005, 08:28 am
lucyrocks73: New Member... and a New Post!!!

Hi... some of you on the NML might know me as Marty. I just found this by following the link in this month's "Banner" and I have to say, I love it... but it seems like everyone disapeared!!! So, in hopes of reviving this community, I decided to post.
Title: Starcrossed lovers (http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2543756/1/)
Suethor: Sweet Peach Blossom (http://www.fanfiction.net/u/864926/)
Name: Peach Blossom
Oh, What Gorgeous Hair!: "Strands of her pretty blond hair fell out of the bun she put it in and framed her face angleicaly"
Eyes Like...: not mentioned
Sue-type: Theater-sue
Of Course, She Owns...: A copy of Romeo and Juilet
I Didn't Know He Had a Sister/Cousin!: Racetrack and "Traintrack"'s cousin. Traintrack is apparently Race's sister...
She's From Where?: Georgia
Whose Girlfriend is She, Anyway?: Mush and Spot... ooh, she has not one, but two lovers...
Rating: Five years... this is a disaster...
Notes: Traintrack??? That's warped... And Spot likes Romeo and Juliet... and is quoting Shakespere (the author keeps spelling it "Shakespear")... He wants to be Romeo in Medda's production of it, so he can get closer to Peach who's going to be Juliet. There are fifty million spelling errors, and everyone's character is completely wrong.
Excerpt(s):

After the show Traintrack and Peahc Blossom weer walking back to the lodgin house together. “SO I heah you’se was takling to Spot.”

“Yeah so/” Peach Blossom asked.

“What ddi he want?”

“Nothin. We ran inta each othah.” Traintrack had almost become Spot’s girl, but in the end didn’t.

“Ok, if y a say so!”

When they got to the loding house, the boys were all playing poker. Traintrack wanted to be delt in, but Peach blossom didn’t know how to play. So she sat by Mush instead. Mush grinned slightly.

“Hiya peach!” Spot was there again.

“Hey! Long time no see. “She joked. He nodded. “Why ain’t ya playin?”

“I don’t know how to!”

“Well I’se could teach ya”

Mush stood up. “No, I’ll teach ‘er!” he shouted.

“Kay” Spot shrugged. “I was jus offering.”

“Yeah, well don...” Mush saidd angrily.

Peach Blossom watched him in suprise. She had never seen Mush that way before. What could have brought it on?” She shrugged it off and continued watching the game in intrest.

Best Line: "Oh, I love Romeo and Juliet!"-Spot

God help us all...

Sun, Oct. 9th, 2005 02:49 pm (UTC)
falling_shadow

EW.

That is such a desecration to Shakespeare... unbelievable...

Yay for postage! I keep finding stories to spork on here, but marching season eats up any time I might have to actually post... oh well, it's almost over.

Sun, Oct. 9th, 2005 06:44 pm (UTC)
schizophrenic0

*wince* That fic makes my head hurt.

Fri, Feb. 17th, 2006 08:01 pm (UTC)
(Anonymous)

Hey! Sweet Peach Blossom here. I just want to thank you for helping spread the utter baddness of my story. Seriously, thanks a million! :)